Really good job on the eye, just that next time you should edit out some of the lash base or find a colored on to match some eye liner. Maybe a better lash glue too since the ends don't seem to want to lay down. Also your eyebrow needs tweezed a bit, or photoshoped out because I can see those hairs too. Unless you are going for a more grunge look. A great beginning in eye photography though! Keep practicing!